Score: 6

"What the hell is cohession?"

submission: Krieg

date: July 11, 2006

Okay, I will satrt with the sound. The songs you choose, while they are pretty good, did not fit the movie at all. The first song that came in while loading up the truck gave the rest away too much. It seemed like you just randomly inserted it. Then it went silent, a few gunshots later and pull harder comes on. WTF? Trivium are a great band, but your timing is awful and they do not fit the movie.

As for the graphics, My advise is not to try 3d till you improve. What was actually flash work was better than what most do for stickmen. However, stick drawings are a bit limiting and you should aim to draw real people

The movie itself had very little plot, And it made no sense whatsoever, just 'theres some war on, and well, its 2013, then 2023, then 2013, then 2023 again, then 12 years before that.
And you had me lost within 20 seconds.

Really, you lack one thing: Cohession.
Your movie seems like a load of scenes thrown together, with random changes in drawing style and music. It just seems just too random for any sense to come of it.

My advice is the following:
1. Stick to one movie style
2. Don't just insert songs in. Its not about having a cool soundtrack, its about having one that fits
3. Don't tell your plot in 20 seconds in a monologue.
4. Try not to be cliche

This movie was terrible due to its total lack of cohession. I hope you know what it means.

Score: 5

"ok."

submission: 57 Seconds of Chaos

date: June 11, 2006

erm... mofo... its a movie.
an average one at that.

Score: 9

"OMG! J00 R RASIST!"

submission: Indians and Canada

date: June 9, 2006

lIEK, omG, WTF, J00 R SO RASIST! LIEK J00 HAVN'T EVEN DONE PROPER RESEARCH, BECUZ EVERYTHING ON NG IS ACCURATLY MADE TO BE LIEK TOTALLY FACTUAL. AND JOO R RASSIST BECAUSE NOT LIKING BLACK PEOPLE IS RASSIST. J00 LIEK SAID, omg CANADA IS CHRISTIAN, omg, CANADA WAS FORMED BY TEH BRITISH AND TEH FRENCH, NOT TEH CHRISTIANS. DUMBASS.
SO, ALL 0 4 JOO.

Oh my god, you people all need to get a life- People coming up with reasons why this is racist-

The guy who said he knows someone who is indian and going to harvard- Yes, we were so wrong. your friend has worked in his life, he has defied the stereotype, anybody who brings up this stereotype again is racist.

News for you!- We are not the only people in the world that stereotype! Why do you think 9/11 happened? They assume all americans aren't muslim, and hate western culture- Western culture is stereotype in the form of goods.

It seems to me that, racism is a one way door- White people CAN be racist- Black people cannot.

And these people are of course right, we, white people are the filth of the earth, the only ones who are racist, the only ones who step over other people, god bless couloured people

-If you say anything about that pisstake, or me calling racism a one way door, you can shut up, because you are racist. And, wether we like it or not, we are all prejudice.

Also, anyone who takes flash movies on newgrounds seriously, is also a total dumbass. The news isn't entirly factual either- it is dramasized. Would this flash have got the point across as well if it was - "80% of canadian immigrants recive welfare" and similar quotes, would iit be interesting?

Also, as for reasons they immigrate... What reason do they have for leaving their own country if they have a doctorate? Unless they have to leave- because of fear of their death, i cannot see any reason- The quality of life is better in america ect... so what? that means you are leaving out of greed, and because the state can afford to support you.

As for racism... its a complex topic- reggarding what is racist.. heres an example for you all-

'You dirty ni**er' would be racist.
'black people immigrate and steal or jobs' is not racist, because the phrase is used to describe a persons opinion. "HEY BUT DON'T CALL THEM BLACK!" Your right, im sorry, Mr.indian/pakistani/morrocan/south african/saudi arabian/ australian man. I, Mr.British/american/french/german/canadian self did not notice, because like all
British/american/french/german/canadian people, i am racist.

Wether the quote is fact or fiction doesn't matter, or wether it is researched doesn't matter. IT IS AN OPINION!

Crazy, you made me laugh with that. hope you all enjoyed reading this

-Filthy racist white person (Of course, you knew i was racist already, because i am white)

Score: 10

"Lets not forget:"

submission: :: FoAmY :: CDs ::

date: May 2, 2006

Prices.
CDs from some bands are out the fucking window. Example
Slayer- Reign in blood, £16.99 (around $25) and its a single disc. the record industry brought this upon itself.

Score: 7

"OMFG"

submission: MGS3 Beginning

date: January 26, 2006

A first flash that took over 1 minuite to make. I cannot belive it.
Your animation is a bit sloppy, but with a bit of improvement you could do really well.
I dont like how you copied metal gear solid for the intro exactly. A Nice idea might be to tell the story from a different perspective or in the world oif metal gear outside the plotlines of the games. Anyway, pretty damn good for a first attempt. I hope get to see your next.

Score: 9

"Very Nice work..."

submission: Genevieve

date: December 27, 2005

The fact a childrens story could reach daily no 1. when i was watching it at the start i was wondering how it could win, but i was amazed. the story was unique, kind of funny and very well drawn. congratulations.

Score: 7

"Haha"

submission: This is KoRn

date: December 26, 2005

That was funny, the animation could use improvement. But i feel the same way about many bands, it seems that loads of bands are 'sewlling out' these days... oh well, a 7

Score: 2

"i think ive gone blind (No pun intended)"

submission: Korn tribute

date: December 25, 2005

Im sorry man, but that was poor. It was way too slowly done, you need to work on your choice of fps. Im a huge fan of korn but that was just i slide show of images you probably found on google. I hope yor next flash is better.

Score: 8

"Pretty nice short"

submission: ET Phone home

date: August 15, 2005

Very nice work ferosso. im not much of a fan of shorts but it has good graphics and was pretty funny. good job.

Score: 5

"Original graphics"

submission: Smokers beware...

date: July 25, 2005

Good to try some new style. However, it was a bit short. maybe improve graphics.